Your dps is presented really well. You layered the dps appropriatly meaning the image can clearly be seen and it doesnt clash with the text . which makes it easy for me to navigate around your dps. Your dps also looks very appealing because you used a range of colours .In particular the shadow effect on one of your models in the picture looks really innovative this will draw your target audience towards your dps. The storyline is also interesting and the qoutes make the dps quite personal as well. (Mark : Level 3 , 13 marks)
Your dps is presented really well. You layered the dps appropriatly meaning the image can clearly be seen and it doesnt clash with the text . which makes it easy for me to navigate around your dps. Your dps also looks very appealing because you used a range of colours .In particular the shadow effect on one of your models in the picture looks really innovative this will draw your target audience towards your dps. The storyline is also interesting and the qoutes make the dps quite personal as well.
ReplyDelete(Mark : Level 3 , 13 marks)
I would agree that it is level 3.
ReplyDeletewww: effective mage and well edited. headline font is good.
ebi: column text needs work
13/20
I would agree that it is level 3.
ReplyDeletewww: effective mage and well edited. headline font is good.
ebi: column text needs work
13/20